Zainab, some of your posts are of a high quality, such as your re-drafts of case studies. However some other elements could be improved: your proposal is rather brief and you do not have the video of the feedback, or an evaluation of this feedback. You could also expand the newsstand task to include an account of how magazines are distributed. You need to find a press pack for Rock Sound magazine. The link for your timetoast doesn't work. Can you also add more regular reflections in-between tasks, on your progress, targets and independent work.
Zainab, some of your posts are of a high quality, such as your re-drafts of case studies. However some other elements could be improved: your proposal is rather brief and you do not have the video of the feedback, or an evaluation of this feedback. You could also expand the newsstand task to include an account of how magazines are distributed. You need to find a press pack for Rock Sound magazine. The link for your timetoast doesn't work. Can you also add more regular reflections in-between tasks, on your progress, targets and independent work.
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